ninjaboy
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Post by ninjaboy on Oct 18, 2008 20:55:13 GMT -5
Technique Name: Water bomb jutsu Rank: C Element: water Style: [Ninjutsu Description: The user summons 4 water clones. The 4 clones will follow slowly behind the real one The user will do a few hand signs and the water clones will change from the appearance of the user to a giant water ball. The user can control the water to ball to move where ever it wants. After Effects: The attack is very powerful so can only be used once in a while. Exclusive?
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Post by admin on Oct 19, 2008 18:50:38 GMT -5
why would one summon the water clones rather than water itself?
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ninjaboy
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Post by ninjaboy on Oct 20, 2008 15:27:48 GMT -5
That would be to hard to make enough water for this attack so he uses clone because he is about the right height to make it but i'll change it if you want. Besides I though it would be better to write the uses of it this way.
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Post by admin on Oct 20, 2008 17:13:19 GMT -5
I would like it edited to where the clones help you form the water orb, rather than become it.
also, please use the english words, rather tha suiton
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ninjaboy
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Post by ninjaboy on Oct 22, 2008 16:21:21 GMT -5
Then how am i going to make it when their is no water around. It isn't to powerful cant u just accept it.
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Post by admin on Oct 24, 2008 18:00:11 GMT -5
I simply required an explination.
Approved
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